Title of TV Drama and fonts used I have used the name “It’s a Long Story” because it gives my story a big range of things it could be about including plot, characters. But gives people an idea of what the show is about showing people its about drama and stories. The title is inspired by the pilot episode plot, because in the opening scene, something bad happens at a party. When something happens people want to know the story, the thing they tend to hear back is “It’s a long story. Characters 3-4 main characters
Detailed plot outline My idea is about a group of teenagers that go to college together. They have all know each other for a while. Stevie, Jacob and Kevin. They have known each other since nursery and have grown up together. One day theres a party at Jacobs house, everyone from Kingsville School came. Music, lights, Alcohol, cigarettes and drugs. The party goes on, we see people smoking, drinking, partying. Storyboard (title sequence and opening scene)
P3: Create a pitch to communicate an idea to the client
Draft Pitch
Need to add marketing and distribution to the the pitch.
M2: Identify Potential Client Questions And Amend Pitch And Proposal Documentation
Focus group: Can you develop the characters more? On my character slide I only have the images and without explanation the audience will find it hard to understand. When doing my presentation to the small focus group I didn't fully talk about the target audience. The stated that text on the picture slide as well would be too much so making notes that I can say to the client will be easier.
What are the Legal and Ethical issues? I haven't spoken about the Legal and Ethical issues for my show which the focus group pick up on, they said that I should either add another slide with that in or talk about it within a slide. Its important for the client to know the issues with the show before investing in it to ensure the audience enjoy it and are not harmed by it. To improved my presentation I will talk about the legal and ethical issues within my piece. What is the ratings for you show? My focus group stated that my piece does not have the BBFC rating on it so the client wouldn't know what rating it is if it was going to DVD. I am going to develop further my rating within the first slide talking about target audience.
What are the Marketing and Distribution methods you are going to use? The focus group pointed out that there is no marketing and distribution which is important to tell the client the ways they can market the product. The focus group said I should add another slide to fix this. To improve I will add the two slides so the client knows what to do with the product, also showing that I know what I'm doing.
Changes I needed to make:
Develop further on characters
Add how your are going to distribute it
Add how you're going to market the product
Develop more on the rating - Look at BBFC for ratings